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What The Eye sees Prt.2 by ~Bad-Kitty-Girl1067:iconBad-Kitty-Girl1067:





"Wait for me!!" I shouted out to the top of my lungs, they both stopped and looked back seeing a girl with long brown hair that went halfway down to her back, she wore a green short-sleeved shirt with black pants that went down to her knees, she wore a small black jacket over her green shirt, the sleeves went to her elbows. She had two different eye colors, her right eye was blue and her left eye was light purple, her bangs covered her eyebrows. Her fox ears popped out along with her two-tails swaying behind her, but there was one thing about me; and that was I didn't have fur. Even though I don't have fur, I get very cold when it comes to winter.

"Hurry ally, we don't have much time! And where are the others?" Elaide yelled out, I grunted as I ran faster, suddenly, a cat flew by me, and up ahead. "Tai! Quit going ahead of me! You're supposed to keep watch!" I shouted out, the cat stopped and came back to me and was now right next to me. She meowed lightly and said to me, “There catching up!". Tai was a cat who had small angel wings that could expand out at least five to seven inches. Her eyes were teal mixed with a light green, her tail was a shape of a thunderbolt, and a small sterling gold ring was around her tail. Tai has a special ability to split in two, so her body was cut down the middle of her body. Her fur color was White on the left and black on the other, the left side of Tai was with me.

We both finally caught up with Fen and Elaide and catched our breaths, "There coming." I said answering Elaide's question before Tai flew past me. I looked back seeing both Syaoran (<- the clone) and Syaoron, Princess Sakura running closely behind, Fai and kurogane along with Klonoa and Guntz. When they came up to us, the other half of Tai came back to her and fused back into one. "That...thing still scares me." Guntz said at last to me, Klonoa giggled as I told him to cut that out and get use to it. Klonoa was a cat like creature with black and white fur and yellow eyes; he wore a blue short sleeved shirt with navy blue pants that went to his knees. He wore a blue cap that had a Pac-man symbol on the side. Klonoa had a childish side to him, what I always knew about him was that he wanted to be a hero badly. I guess he must have stuck with Guntz along the way here. Guntz was a wolf like creature with black and yellow fur and had beautiful blue eyes; he wore a black shirt with black pants. He wore a red long sleeved jacket over his black shirt...he had worn black boots almost every day. Guntz was Klonoa's rival and was known as the 'Golden Killer', but since Klonoa was around him for so long, they both became friends. Guntz was just like Kurogane, you'll never know if he'll be nice or will get mad when someone ticks him off.

"Yay!! I scared Guntz to the bone!" Tai squealed out swinging her paws up and down constantly, Guntz's face darkened. "Come on! We gotta hurry!" Klonoa said to us as we all agreed and headed north; the path had large fields of fresh green grass, a dirt road went on for miles until there were two other roads that went different directions. Hmm? Who are we running away from? Whelp, the people are throwing bombs in towns or in areas are not people, there robots who are following a man's orders. His name was Garlen, A round man with a mechanical claw for a hand, he wore general like clothing’s, and he became evil and began destroying things. He was held in prison for a few years; he and two of his allies snuck out and began killing people and stealing things. One of his allies is a maniacal clown named Joka (Joker) who often resorts to cheating and other underhanded tricks in order to win. Hid clothes had orange and red stripes, his tail curled at the end and he had cat ears. His creepy smile and his voice make him a maniac, his teeth were red and he would get mad whenever he loses. Garlen's other ally was a psychopathic cat named Janga, dressed in a long purple raincoat and a Purple hat with a yellow star on it. In the place of hands, he has long, red poisoned claws, which he uses often, he is known for murdering Guntz's father...Janga's eyes are just like mine; two different eye colors, his left eye was blue and his right eye was yellow. Although he was known for his poisonous claws, he was also known as being foul-mouthed, a murderer, a drinker and even a possible pedophile, which scares me.
Elaide still held onto fen's hand as she asked us, "What are we going to do now? Since there getting closer to us...". "We just need to figure out how to get rid of them...we did that once, and it took them a week to find us...we just need to do that again, but we don't want them to find us again." Syaoran explained as Syaoron continued where he left off, "If Janga, Garlen or Joka finds us, who knows what could happen to us...besides, Garlen is probably after Ally since she possesses a rare star within her, he'll do anything to get her...or he could be after Sakura-Hime...” Sakura walked up to fen and clasped her hands in hers; she had a worried look on her face. So did I, but I held my heart up high along with my courage.

"But we need more time, if we go a different direction again, we won't know how long it would take for them to find us... They lost our tracks since ally had an idea and used her tails to sweep away our trail on the dirt road..." Kurogane explained, I lightly chuckled as I looked away not letting them see my face that was turning pink. "And since they found us a week ago, we probably have a chance to not let them find us again, and maybe they'll probably not find us for at least a few weeks, maybe a month or two." Fai said to us as we stopped and looked at the road that split into different direction; North, East, and West. Syaoran stood right next to me and pulled out a map. he looked at the map as he glanced at the three roads one at a time every ten seconds, "The road that goes north leads to a town called 'Angel City'...the road that goes east leads to an area called Edonis and the road that leads west leads to a huge forest...beyond that there's a hidden village in there." Syaoran explains, Guntz grins and says at last, "Why don't we take the road to the west, I know Janga, he doesn't go to forest areas like that, he'll pick that road last.” Klonoa then took two steps forward and said, "Joka is also like Janga, only he'll take the road that goes north..." Syaoran doesn't say anything, while he was thinking, my fox ears twitch as I look back seeing people run past us and takes the road that leads into a forest, but that's not the only thing why I turn around, Syaoron looks at me and notices that my eyes turned from a normal look to wolf like eyes. "Here they come." I said to them as monsters appear and hurries toward us.

Before we could do anything, Guntz was the first to shoot at the monsters, one of his bullets shot one in the head. That monster falls to the ground as the dirt covered half of the dead monsters body, dust was also covering the blood that oozed out as more came and charged at us, some monsters stepped on the one on the ground. All the monsters stopped at least twenty feet away from us, I extended both of my arms as a beautiful glow appears and wraps around my arms. Two of them charge toward us, the rest didn't move, just when they got close...I swung both of my arms in different directions as the beautiful light starts to revolve around each other, the two monsters stop as the light was now around them. As the two monsters watched the light, my light starts spinning around the monsters and became violent, the light goes closer and closer to them. I was controlling the lights' movements as I motioned my left and in a circle, the wind began to revolve around where the two monsters were.

"I've decided which road to take!" Syaoran said to us at last, Kurogane overheard and looked at me, "Ally, you can stop torturing them, you can do that later!" Kurogane told me, my fox ear twitch as I nodded. I moved moving my hand in a constant circle as I raised my left hand and swung so hard, I cause the ground that was a least two feet away from me to rise and quickly charge toward the monsters that were caught in my trap and those that were waiting to attack. It was like a sonic boom, monsters were pushed back to where the destroyed town was some stayed where they were and didn't move back from the sudden impact, and just like that...they were dead.

"Wow! That was awesome!" Tai exclaimed out loud as she flew around me, I smiled. "Not bad for a fox girl who possesses a rare star," Guntz said to me, I looked at him. "Who do you think I am? A girl who looks weak? That’s not me, I see a skinny girl who is stronger than she looks!" I replied back to him. It was true, I do possess a rare star, and how did I get it? I can't remember how I got it, but with it, I was able to control all the elements in the palm of my hands...I was able to see things in my dreams; I can do all kinds of things with it.

"So? Which road are we talking?" I asked. "We're going to take the road that goes west, after that, we'll go to the east." Syaoran answered. I turned my whole body halfway, letting my right arm be shown to the crowd of dead monsters. I kept looking at the road that lead east...Edonis...that sounds like a good place to stay, but not when Janga, Joka And Garlen are coming...I don't know what they'll do to us, but I know one thing...They won't go easy on me since I hold the star in my heart. When I was born, there was a small hole in my heart, I wasn't able to join the army or do anything because of that hole in my heart. When I was growing up, the hole in my heart gotten bigger...when I was little; the hole was about an inch...but now, it’s now about four inches. Since I have the star in my heart, I can do anything - but when my heart beats in pain like as if I’m having a heart attack at the age of sixteen, the star can't do anything to help me.

I was the special child in my family, not because of my heart condition, but that I have the genes of a Black Andes Wolf and a Two-tailed fox running through my veins. I didn't hear Klonoa call out my name, they were already going while my mind began to stir. "Ally!" Elaide shouted out, "Is she okay?" Fen asked, looking a different direction with her blind eyes. "She's just standing there looking at the opposite road that we are on...if she doesn't realize that she's in the open field, she'll be killed first before we know it!" Guntz replied to Fen. Sakura blinked her jade green eyes as she ran toward me, letting go of Fen's hands. When she was running toward me, she stopped and looked at the large pile of dead monsters. Suddenly, one survived the impact and stood out from its dead allies. It noticed me looking in a different direction in the corner of its eye; it then took out a bow and arrow set.

"One survived ally's attack!!" Sakura said to Syaoron as it pulled out the last arrow and aimed at Sakura's heart. Both Syaoran and Syaoron ran toward her, "Sakura-Hime!!" Syaoron yelled out as the monster grinned, but instead of shooting Sakura, it aimed at me and shot the arrow before getting shot in the head by Guntz. By the time they both stopped from the sound of Guntz's Riffle, I was already in pain. I was lucky that my right arm was in the way, if it wasn't, the arrow would've hit me in the heart. I quickly grasped my right arm with my left arm as I fell onto the dirt road, the pain felt much worse than being stabbed my a knife.
"Ally!!" Sakura screamed as tears streamed down my face, my blood oozed out from where the tip of the arrow shot at, I screamed in pain. Sakura clasped her hands over her mouth trying to hold back the unwanted tears, Syaoran quickly ran toward me as he heard familiar voices that came from where the peaceful town once was:

"Hey! I hear someone screaming over there!!" (Garlen)

"It’s them!! I see that fox girl who tricked us the last time!” (Janga)

"DON'T JUST STAND THERE YOU IDIOTS I CALL 'HELPERS', GET GOING!!!!" (Joka)

"We've gotta go, now!!" Syaoron shouted as everyone except Sakura, Fai and Kurogane took the road that lead to the large forest. Sakura stood there looking at my injured arm like a deer caught in headlights, my blood ran down my arm onto the dirt road that lead to another direction, Fai and kurogane didn't say a word. Syaoran put his arm behind my back and the other under my legs as he picked me up. He turned to the shaken princess who kept staring at my wounded arm, tears formed in her eyes as they streamed down her cute face.

"Hime, let's go!" Syaoran told her, she gotten back to reality as she quickly agreed as she ran up ahead, Fai and kurogane stayed as Syaoran glanced at me; I was now unconscious because I fainted from how painful my arm was, tears kept pouring down my face as he then ran toward the huge forest. The forest looked like it had a few areas where there were a lot of open areas, along with large red trees, "Hold on..." Syaoran said to me as he shed a tear that landed on my left cheek.

To be continued...
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Author's Comments

I love this Syaoran icon!

The second part of a round robin writing art trade that I'm doing with :iconhachi-unwritten:.

Yes, I have it as a cliffhanger...4 now :evillaugh: DUN DUN DUUNNN! [INSERT EVIL RANDOM LAUGH HERE]

and yes, I got a little side tracked when I was working on this, I was alomst done with it when my computer froze up on me while listening to music, I was mad when I had to restart my computer along with RE-working on this...

and while I was working on this, I was also watching Tsubasa Chronicle, the english version and - Oops, I got the four travelers on this story along with two other characters...Which happens to be Guntz and Klonoa from Klonoa heroes...which I want to play soo badly (but i don't have it), how I got those two in here? I was listening to the remix version of "Stepping Wind" that plays on a game called "NAMCO X NAPCOM"

but yay, I got this done^^

Plz note that the characters were not made up...except Fen, Elaide (Hey, I remembered how to spell it, yay!!), Tai and Ally...the rest are not from me or :iconhachi-unwritten:
Hope you know what to do next Hachi-chan...and sorry about the drama at the middle to the cliffhanger...

Ally and Tai~:iconbad-kitty-girl1067:
Elaide and Fen~:iconhachi-unwritten:
Syaoran(THE CLONE), Syaoron, Princess Sakura, Kurogane and Fai~ CLAMP!!!
Klonoa and Guntz~NAMCO

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:iconhachi-unwritten:
you went in a totally different direction lol ^^
I think with each thing you write your getting better!

that's why I hate to say this, but I'm not going to be able to continue this T^T I don't know most of the characters that you used (villain wise mostly), but on a good note i had an idea. If you would like, you can continue it, and I will continue from my part (adding in Ally and Tai of course) and we can write parallel stories and see where they end up ^^

but if you would like I can still try and continue where you left off as well ^^

oh and Fen is a boy >.< lol X3

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see?
I told you people wouldn't like it when I do things like this...

oh well, how about we go in different directions...but I really don't mind if we work on different things or at least try to continue where I left off...its your choice^^

Oops, sorry Fen, didn't mean to make you a girl^^;

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Close your eyes, count to ten, fall apart and start again

Icon was made by Hachi24

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I ♥ Klonoa Heroes - Omochikaeri♥~

Namco VS Capcom rules~♥
:iconhachi-unwritten:
wait, no It's not that I don't like it! I'm sorry if I made it sound that way T^T
hmm...I'm no sure how to explain properly -_-

I don't know the characters you used, and I don't want to mess up their personalities or abilities

hmmm...maybe if you let me re-write and replace someone of the characters I would be about to do it or at least cut some of them out, just let me know what you think ^^

Fen: "It's okay I forgive you!" :) :hug:

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:iconbad-kitty-girl1067:
its okay, i understand...you don't have enough time to work on it becuase of the maild on DA (Are they still getting full in both of your accounts on here?? )

oh i see...hehe, sorry^^;
but sure, I don't mind if you change the bad characters^^

Ally: I promise I'll never do that again...unless if I do the same thing again, plz let me know^^;

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Close your eyes, count to ten, fall apart and start again

Icon was made by Hachi24

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I ♥ Klonoa Heroes - Omochikaeri♥~

Namco VS Capcom rules~♥
:iconhachi-unwritten:
lol it does sometimes ^^

Okay i will start working on that hopefully next week ^^

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:iconbad-kitty-girl1067:
okay^^
also, you can change the evil characters I accidentally placed in there, I don't really mind at all^^

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Close your eyes, count to ten, fall apart and start again

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I ♥ Klonoa Heroes - Omochikaeri♥~

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